i took a chance on unique experience.
i chose a path off the main road,
though i came to find out it was a path quite beaten...
in the clearing i see a structure.
the structure.
no one knows how it came to be and no one asks why.
i suppose i was looking for it,
but i became quite distracted by the twisting and turning of the path...
(merriment for some, toiling for others)
there it sat-- pearl sheen, pinkish in hue.
rounded at the top,
straight and pointed at the base.
pushing thoughts back like vines--
no time to be reminded of the previous attempts.
it looks beautiful from afar.
upon close examination it is a configuration
exuding function over form
jagged, bolted, hasty--
a crude steel object.
the scent of warm metal touched by human skin
it's sides rough to the touch
when stroked opposite to its cadence.
to find an opening...
i tried pushing,
i tried pulling.
hands became red and raw,
shavings of crosshatched metal
sink in and itch.
failure through force.
[the only way in is from the invitation inside]
the widowmaker eulogy
Tuesday, July 05, 2005
1 Comments:
i especially like, "pushing thoughts back like vines"- very nice metaphor.
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